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[fic] Ouran High School Host Club: That Business of Art 
1st-Mar-2007 07:57 am
Rating: PG13 for bad words
Characters/Pairings: Hikaru & Kaoru, kinda preslash
Download: pdf
Disclaimer: Ouran and its characters do not belong to me.
Timeline: Episode/chapter 5.

That Business of Art
1st-Mar-2007 04:27 pm (UTC)
That was so in character that I had to stop and check that it wasn't part of the manga. The story was gorgeous and had this beautiful, sort of understated mischief to it which I absolutely adored.

Well don with this piece of writng and I hope to read more of your stuff in future.
2nd-Mar-2007 07:45 pm (UTC)
As I was extremely worried that it was all over the place and made no sense, you made my day yesterday with this comment. Thanks :)
1st-Mar-2007 05:43 pm (UTC)
Agreeing with the above - very in character, and very good. This was fun and interesting to read, and I loved the art concept.
2nd-Mar-2007 07:48 pm (UTC)
The art thing got a bit out of hand, but I'm glad it still worked somehow.

Thanks for the comment :) I live on these, seriously.
1st-Mar-2007 07:08 pm (UTC)
I loved this. Plus you went above and beyond "the fight". Actually this is probably my favorite "fight" inspirated fic yet.
It was very pleasant and sweet.
2nd-Mar-2007 07:50 pm (UTC)
Strangely enough, I don't think I've ever seen a fic dealing with that fight. O_O (Which might be what made me decide to make my own.)

Sap Sweetness was what I aimed for, so that's good.
1st-Mar-2007 09:48 pm (UTC)
This was absolutely amazing. Your writing style was perfect for a piece like this. Outstandingly in-character, wonderful followthrough of the plot, just fantastic. I feel closer to the twins even more than before. Once again, well done. ♥
2nd-Mar-2007 07:51 pm (UTC)
Your icon is a major ego boost. XD (The comment too, I must say.)

Although at some point it became a mix of the anime and manga storyline, but, er, let's pass on that.

Glad you enjoyed!
2nd-Mar-2007 12:21 am (UTC)
You're an exceptional writer, and it shows. :) Hope you write some more H/K soon.
2nd-Mar-2007 08:08 pm (UTC)
That's... quite a lot of praise. :) I have some more in the works, but who knows when that'll get done...
2nd-Mar-2007 02:03 am (UTC)
2nd-Mar-2007 07:51 pm (UTC)
2nd-Mar-2007 05:03 am (UTC)
I absolutely loved this. I can't think of anything to say other than I loved it but I don't want to sound like a broken record. Still, it was really great.
2nd-Mar-2007 07:56 pm (UTC)
I'll confess this one thing: I really don't mind broken records that tell me they love something of mine *nodnod* ^_^
2nd-Mar-2007 12:05 pm (UTC)
It has been such a long, long, long while since I last read a HikaruKaoru piece that was as beautifully written and perfectly portrayed as this.

I have just had 9.5 hours of sleep, and today is Friday, and I just finished reading a Hitachiincest fic that kept me giggling - I do declare that today is the best day ever, and it hasn't even started, yet.

My words are not enough to explain the amount of praise you deserve. Seriously. This is marvelous.
2nd-Mar-2007 07:55 pm (UTC)
9.5 hours of sleep. ;___; I'm so jealous.

Er, with that said, I'm glad you liked it that much even though the -cest part somehow disappeared in the writing. Thanks for the comment!
3rd-Mar-2007 06:42 am (UTC)
*faints due to satisfaction*

*dreams happily*

*utters "Good Job" while sleeping*
3rd-Mar-2007 08:45 am (UTC)

4th-Mar-2007 01:41 am (UTC)
It's so cute! ^-^

4th-Mar-2007 09:25 am (UTC)

9th-Mar-2007 07:45 am (UTC)
I really enjoyed it. A very nice read ^___^ (and, wow, good idea for the art project o_o)
9th-Mar-2007 10:09 am (UTC)
This comment has turned a long, tedious morning at work into a gloriously shiny happy few hours. /Tamaki-mode

But, seriously, thanks. Feedback makes me happy. :)

(About the art project, I totally got the idea while I was colouring a picture of the twins on photoshop... real life meets fiction and all. yes. >_>)
19th-Mar-2007 10:55 am (UTC)
Aww, nice story! I was beginning to despair at the lack of quality twins fics, but this gave me hope ♥

Mm, if you don't mind concrit, then yeah, this fic was a bit all over the place, so it was a bit difficult (for me anyway) to read. It's not a problem at all in your drabbles, but then again I usually enjoy short fics anyway.

I like your writing, am looking forward to read more~

19th-Mar-2007 11:29 am (UTC)
Hope is great. We need caffeine. XD

I appreciate concrit beyond words. :) And yes, it is all over the place; but I tweaked and twisted and changed everything and it still didn't help, and there came a point where it was either posting of trashing the whole thing. :/ (Not that it's an excuse, mind you... but I just didn't know how to tie it all together better.)

Thank s, for both the comment and the concrit, which there is never enough of~
19th-Jun-2007 09:02 pm (UTC)
oh my wow. ♥ ♥ ♥ I love so much about this. I love most the fact that it's not slash. :O ♥
19th-Jun-2007 09:20 pm (UTC)
Amusingly enough, this is one of the many, many prequels to the ginormous threesome fic (it shows because the evil art teacher appears in that one too >_>). So technically it's preslash? XD

Glad you liked it! ^^
20th-Jun-2007 01:40 am (UTC)
Amazing. And I can't help but wonder deep in the back corner of my head just what the teacher's reaction would have been...

And, just so you know just HOW amazing this is, and you are in my opinion on the writing... I have never reviewed, commented on, or even made myself heard in relation to an Ouran fic. Sure, I look at images, but I never fave them. Sure I read the stories, but I never bookmark them. Your stuff, on the other hand, I make a VERY big exception to, and I do so hope that you shall eventually return to the fandom.
20th-Jun-2007 05:47 am (UTC)
She examined all the pieces in random order, therefore separating the twins, and she almost didn't notice that their projects were connected until she saw Hikaru's overly smug expression. Then she went back and figured it out. Since she isn't completely insensible, she had to admit defeat and gained a grudging respect for them - since she hates losing, she'll probably be bullying them all through the year. (Hikaru will do his best to bully back, as Kaoru watches indulgently from the sidelines and helps his brother every now and then.)

I have been thinking about this way too much.

And, wow. There are no words for how much I appreciate that. ♥ Thanks!
20th-Jun-2007 03:19 am (UTC)
I love the detailed way you wrote this fic, and the measured, careful way you built up the story. There's a lot of depth in the portrayal of the twins, and Hikaru's reaction rings very true. Thanks for this; I really enjoyed it.
20th-Jun-2007 06:01 am (UTC)
See my previous answer re: happy flailing. Thanks for the comments! They make me happy. :)
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